O – On the Brink, a haiku – When the Door Closes

O – On the Brink, a haiku

O - On the Brink, a haiku

Young girl stands on the
brink of womanhood; before
her: Life, fathoms deep.

Written for the A to Z Challenge and NaPoWriMo
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April 17, 2014

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4 thoughts on “O – On the Brink, a haiku”

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sheenmeem
April 17, 2014 at 4:50 am

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Life fathoms deep. Wow!

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- Vee dC
  April 18, 2014 at 1:17 am
  
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  Thanks, Sheen. 🙂
  
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Sukanya Ramanujan
April 17, 2014 at 11:12 am

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very poignant!

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- Vee dC
  April 18, 2014 at 1:16 am
  
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  Thank you!
  
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Constructive criticisms are super welcome! Personal attacks won't be published, though, coz they won't help anyone grow as an artist! Cancel reply

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