Dark and bitter brew
poured into a flowery cup.
Rouse! Hasten to work.
Written for the A to Z Challenge and NaPoWriMo
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When the Door Closes 
April 3, 2014 at 3:43 am
Love it! I have a coffee addiction and I might just have to frame this and hang it in my kitchen, lol.
April 4, 2014 at 4:45 am
I’d be honored! 😀
April 3, 2014 at 3:54 am
Love your haiku!
April 4, 2014 at 4:45 am
Thanks, Sukanya!
April 3, 2014 at 2:53 pm
As I drink my French roast, fair trade, strong cup of coffee with tons of fresh cream I read your haiku and think, yep the world is a wonderful place of kismet and commonplace beauty. Thanks for sharing this with all of us.
April 4, 2014 at 4:38 am
Glad you liked it!
April 3, 2014 at 3:20 pm
Love it! This Haiku heralds me forward. (Coffee cup in hand!). Cheers 😀
April 4, 2014 at 4:37 am
😛
April 3, 2014 at 4:36 pm
I like this. 🙂 Haiku is too simple a form to master with ease (simple does not mean easy!), but I think you’re probably well on your way.
April 4, 2014 at 4:36 am
Thanks, Tammy. 🙂 I fear(ed) haiku. So, like a scab, I just keep going at it til someday it won’t be so intimidating.
April 4, 2014 at 5:06 am
Well, I think you’re getting there. 😀
April 4, 2014 at 5:10 am
😀
April 3, 2014 at 9:38 pm
Very nice. And I love my morning dark and bitter brew. Great cup — nice how we go from bitter and dark to flowery.
Silvia @
SilviaWrites
April 4, 2014 at 4:33 am
Thanks, Silvia! I think that’s how we can stand bitter and dark – because of the flowery, sugary moments. 🙂
April 3, 2014 at 11:42 pm
Haiku impresses me purely because of it’s brevity! Getting it into the required pattern is just mind-boggling.
An A to Z Challenge participant
http://www.fantasyblog.ciaraballintyne.com
April 4, 2014 at 4:49 am
Isn’t it crazy that three little lines could be so frustrating? Crazy being the operative word. I was THAT lady on the trolley continuously counting with her fingers. 😀
April 5, 2014 at 2:22 pm
I need to learn how to write a haiku. I love how precise and descriptive it was written. Enjoyed it!
April 5, 2014 at 5:26 pm
Thanks! It took me a week to get it right! Never counted so much in my life. 🙂